Sabrine

Thank you :) Well I guess that's the best time for inspiration :)

Я, конечно, не про в написании творений на английском, поэтому не уверена в корректности языковых форм и т.п. Хотелось бы донести смысл и настроение, вложенное в стих, написанный за полчаса в 4 часа утра :) Любая критика и исправления приветствуются :)   I put you lying far away And you were breathing with no answer But where did your soul stay When I was writing with this pencil? I know you couldn't fall asleep Because I've left you then so easy But I'm here again to see In autumn sun you lying freezing   New morning comes, are you still here? Before you tell me we were killed.. Let's take a breath again, my dear One last for us, but best to feel it